Better Than Good
2.5 starsThe story and characters are cute. The writing is stilted and a bit awkward at times. It's first person, but it didn't work well for me. It's not as fluid as it should be for a character's voice. No one uses grammar that precisely especially in their own head. But again, cute characters. I liked the figuring it out. I'm a bit of a sucker for that, though cheaters make me twitch.
